Trifextra: Week Forty-Nine
On to the weekend challenge. As you’ll recall from your elementary science class days, the structure of the earth can be divided most simply into three sections: core, mantle, crust.Give us 33 words from it. Interpret the prompt however you wish–literal, metaphorical, or somewhere in between.
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Sinful
Quickly,she threw off her mantle .
Breathing hard,she touched the sticky wetness.
Ah.. heat rising from the core .
She had to-NOW.
Flushed,
she bit into the crust of her juicy Plum pie.
http://www.forloveofthetable.com/2010/09/plum-pie-and-pursuit-of-perfectly-set.html
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haha it was getting a little steamy there!! I wasn’t sure if I should close my eyes while reading the rest ;P
lol!Thk u ,that definitely was my “intention”,wink,wink!
Perfect surprise ending. Love how you wove the words into a cohesive piece.
Thank you so much lumdog:-)Am inspired by you all,i think
very well played! …and named! My pie suddenly seems so mundane in comparison! haha!!!
Each pie had a unique flavour,a different crust-what say?;-)And thank you for “tasting” a slice from mine:-)
Lol – reminds me of that famous When Harry Met Sally scene. “I’ll have what she’s having!
oh,I have heard of this movie but never had the opportunity to see it -now your comment has piqued my interest-so will scour the net to see if i can “see” it:-)Thank you for reading 🙂
The restaurant has a sign that points to where they sat – when the sandwich is just right, you might have the same feeling…
Okay-guess I need to hone my observation skills,lol!Will definitely look out for the sign when I watch the movie-thks for the tip:-)
well the sign wasn’t there during the movie, since it makes the reference – guess you’ll have to get down to NYC and see it for yourself!
OMG!Then I think I will take your word for it-no chance of me ever going abroad:-)
I totally went there – I’m such a naughty moose. 🙂
Ha!ha!Am thrilled that a few of the grp have a naughty imagination,Barbara;-)Thk u:-)-was getting worried that I may have been too “bold”?
well done! you’ve whet many….appetites…with this post 😉
Ha!ha!Thk u:-)
This is fantastic! So steamy! Of course, now I want some pie…
Lol!Thk u Suzanne,am sure many of us made a lot of people hungry ,using this “unique” prompt;-)
Goodness. this is great!
Thk u Deana:-)
Never fear, there are more than just a few here at Trifecta who can touch the sticky wetness and turn it into art. 🙂 Thanks for a humourous yet, steamy, take on the prompt.
Thrilled to hear that & thank u so much for the warm compliment:-)
The heat was definitely rising! This was a perfect set up.
(giggle),I hope it was not “too much”;-)Thank you for liking it:-)
Oh thank goodness it was pie – I wasn’t sure how I could comment on what my mind thought it was! I enjoyed this very much, but have a hankering for pie now. You tricky writer, you 🙂
Ha!ha!You definitely went where I wanted u to go-hungry for more thgs than one i hope;-)Thank u so much Janna-u made my day with this comment((hugs))
mmph pie ❤
ha!ha!Could not resist?Thk u;-)
Haha! Absolutely Wonderful !!
:-)glad u enjoyed it,thk u
Cute! The crust is always what makes the pie! Thanks for the chuckle!
I would love to be able to bake one someday;-)Glad u liked it Sandra-thk u:-)-
Ah pie, the most sensual of desserts. Good job pulling me in.
Thk u for having a slice,Renee 😉
Creative
Thk u:-)
Ha! You know, I almost wrote a piece very much like this, only it wasn’t plum pie I was alluding to. (It didn’t work the way I wanted to, and eventually morphed into something less steamy, but hopefully just as intense.) You totally caught me by surprise!
Oh u should have-two naughty minds r always better than one!Maybe next time we can cook up some thing mischievous as suggestions for the word prompts,what say Christine?lol!Thank you for enjoying my take-look fwd to reading more from u,tc:-)
Ooooo… Spicy! I loved it!
Ha!ha!Thk u Corinne:-)
It is a pity so many people are able to ignore the temptation of Pie!
lol!True!
Well that was wicked!
Hee!Hee!Thank u:-)
Ah so not what I expected LOL! Great job!
Ha!ha!Thank u,glad it rang a bell;-)
Shocked once…shocked twice…not sure what was more naughty…the beginning or end! You made me guilty twice! Very clever with so few words to play with.
Aww,thts a double compliment -so thank you,thank you:-)
Indeed, the writing primed me, but the photo left me dripping!
Ha!ha!Love your word play-my imagination ran riot;-‘)
This is so delicious dear, thanks for giving me the link:)
😀 glad you liked it R.Am still reading the posts-trying to finish the remaining so that I can vote-2 hours remain-then I will return to respond to the comments -then some more writing and reading-hopefully