Trifecta: Week Sixty-Three
This week’s word is:
PATH
1: a trodden way
2: a track specially constructed for a particular use
3a : course, route
b : a way of life, conduct, or thought
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
- Trifecta is open to everyone. Please join us.
So much for Clairvoyance
Samantha looked at the house carefully. The house looked cheerful enough with its blue green shutters on the windows & red tiled roof. A little quaint maybe, but nothing that seemed out of place.
Still, she felt uneasy, especially when she remembered how she had met no one-no one at all, while treading her path towards this place.
At 30, she had had more than her share of adventures. She was with the Homicide department, working as special agent .Her Masters in Criminal Psychology was only a cover –her real talent was clairvoyance.
She rang the bell.
A young woman opened the door, “Detective Samantha Jones. I am here to investigate the death of the twins.”
“Please come in. I am their aunt, Melinda”
“I would like to meet everyone.”
“Yes,of course.”
Two days back, the 3 year old twins had been found in the nursery, with their throats slit.
Samantha despised killers & child killers were the worst of the lot.
After a while Melinda returned, followed by a wan looking Susie, the mother of the murdered twins, her husband Dave, his cousin Jenny, a close friend Mark & his girlfriend Connie.
Angie, the housekeeper, set a tea tray in front of her.
As Samantha was introduced, she shook hands .Images flooded her mind & she saw things she wished she would never have to see again.
“Beasts! Won’t let you get away this time!” she thought.
Funny, Samantha thought a little later, the tea has made me drowsy.
“Is she unconscious?” she asked
“She is dead, stupid! Her tea was poisoned,” he said
“We could not have her catching us!” affirmed another.
“But, what will we do with the body?” she wailed.
“Shut up woman! No one need ever know she was here,” growled the man.
“Yes, good thing she did not come by car & that we were ready.” she added, smiling.
“Go, get that vat of acid out in the backyard, we need to start working immediately,” he commanded.
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Oh my! This really gave me chills. Excellent writing!
Thank you Deana-glad you liked it:-)
Yee-eee! Reminded me of this real-life serial killer here, also known as the acid bath murderer: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_George_Haigh
They made a movie about him, called A is for Acid, the first part is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-6PYKk5Cm5w
This is a well-written story. Well done Atreyee. Although with her psychic powers, one would think Samantha could have detected that the tea was poisoned before she drank it…I dunno. 😛
Oh dear!I am glad I was not the one in his bath,lol!I must go & check it out.Thk u Scriptor for reading & the
links:-)I just started reading all the posts-a mammoth task-just finished 3-eeps-I better run
And why would they want to kill their children?…Who knows, there are a lot of psychos out there… 😯
I think my previous comment went to moderation…just to let you know.
Oh,I already replied:-)Not to worry-whenever I am on WP,I check the comments & reply then & there-otherwise too,you are one of my favourite writers-so no way I am not reading your posts or comments:-)
Ha! She didn’t see that one coming. Nicely done!
Thank you Joe:-)Am in the process of reading through all the entries-will get to yours soon-looking forward to reading your post.
Pesky evidence always having to be gotten rid of, pesky knocking at the door, pesky children… brrrr.
Ha!ha!Thank you for such a spirited comment-glad you enjoyed it-am still halfway through reading all the posts-will be getting to your’s soon-looking forward to that:-)
great story, but I am having trouble buying a psychic that doesn’t know her tea was poisoned. Perhaps that can be covered in another part of the story. Maybe she only hears from dead people – like that guy on that tv show ( don’t want to spoil anything ).
Thank you Bill,an astute observation:-)That’s why my title–kind of ridiculing the idea of a her being a psychic;-)But to be honest,I was held back by the 333 words limit(I talk too much) & then,am too new to this story telling-a month old-started at Trifecta:-)Hoping I will get better in the company of such great writers here by the end of this year-wish me luck-glad you stopped by.
Ahhh, Great title! So much for my astute observations, huh?
No,no,I like to know what you all think-great to have people like you take genuine interest,thank you again Bill:-)
Wow, very creepy! I guess she didn’t “see” their plans to poison her tea. Good one.
Yep,you got it right Lumdog:-)Glad you liked it.
so much for clairvoyance — perfectly said. lol and she should’ve been smarter than to drink tea from strangers — and suspected murderers at that. damn but the image of kids with slit throats is just grisly.. i love the twist in your story.. absolutely enjoyed reading it ^^
Thank you for the fab comment-glad to know that you liked it
Kz:-)
Dark = Love it!
;-)Thank you Gina
Seems she wasn’t quite Clairvoyant enough. Three year old twins with their throats slit… you don’t screw around, do you?
Ha!ha!What a fun comment-thank you Ted & yes she wasn’t quite there-as yet-thus the title;-)
eek! Not a good time to have an “off” day – when you’re surrounded by a brood of vipers in their own pit!
Ha!ha!So true-loved that-“a brood of vipers in their own pit”-indeed!;-)
Thank you:-)
I guess Samantha shouldn’t have taken her criminal psych degree too much for granted! Nice!
Ha!ha!You are so right;-)
Partially clairvoyant wasn’t good enough 🙂 But acid to get rid of the body? Ew!
True & loved that “ew”;-)Thank you Janna:-)
Not a very good homicide detective to ignore all of the creepy red flags around the house lol
Ha!ha!So true-dumb chick-wonder if she was Blonde-lemme go check;-)Thank you Draug -your comments always make me smile:-)
She was clairvoyant and still found this end ?! 🙂 Quite chilling !
As you know clairvoyance is not proved-so the disbelief persists & thus ,my title:-)
Ha! even a clairvoyant can’t save herself..:-) But you really went all way with twins being murdered so gruesomely.. Phew!
Lol!I guess I did-next time maybe I will keep it clean?;-)Thank you Muzer for reading
Nah! It works fine like this too! 🙂
:-)no change of flavour?lol!
Very good intrigue here….sad demise…Diane
:-)Thank you Diane
A gruesome tale.
Thk u:-)
My kind of story. Liked it a lot.:-)
:-)thank you
Oof! So much for seeing that coming… Loved it!
;-)true & thank you Andree’