Trifecta: Week Seventy-One
On to this week’s one-word prompt which, this week, is inspired by the recent arrival of the Hong Kong monsoons and the start of April in general.
rain (transitive verb)
1: to pour down
2: to give or administer abundantly <rained blows on his head>
- Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
- You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
- The word itself needs to be included in your response.
- You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
- Only one entry per writer.
Trifecta decided to give us an option to make a fool of ourselves with this prompt on first April,am sure & I am doing just that with this piece-so have a laugh at my expense,go on 😉
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Girls just want to have fun
Two and a half years have gone by in mourning,since Jeff was snatched away in a horrific accident.Recently however, Jamie was disconcerted to feel the stirrings of a different kind of need within her.
And why the hell not,she thought,she was just 30!Not that there was any dearth of admirers or interested males,for she was rich, and beautiful.Not for nothing were she and Jeff known as the golden couple.But,she was not ready to get involved,just yet.
So, she discussed it with her two close friends,Melissa & Samara, her cousins,Mindy and Jill and here they all are,looking sexy,waiting with bated breath..
The Buffet dinner and wine has made them satiated & tipsy enough to look forward to a night of enjoyment.
The excitement is palpable,as the lights start to dim!All eyes are turned on to the stage where a faint mist of smoke drifts in.Their heart beats rise with the swell of the music.A dark shape appears on the stage and there are sharp cries of anticipation.Suddenly,the spotlight reveals him sliding down the pole,clad only in sexy black shorts .
The girls ooh and aah,as the handsome stripper moves sensuously.His gyrations have the girls drooling .He knows how to titillate and soon has them begging for more.His masculine scent and raw sexuality has the girls swooning in delight.The raunchy talks and ribald jokes the girls had been sharing at dinner,has made them all edgy and their pent up emotions are ready to burst through.
He knows how to strut his stuff. Soon his efforts are rewarded as they rain money on him.
As he nears each girl,his shorts are pulled a little lower,with a fifty here,a hundred there.
Jamie is excited as he comes over. Boldly,she pulls him closer and pushing
him on a chair,straddles him There are hoots of appreciation and sexy catcalls.
Both Jamie and the stripper know where they will be spending the night and smile knowingly as the act comes to an end amid whistles and cheers.
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Thks 🙂
Woot Whoot young lady! I had visions of Matthew McConaughey …but he um well he will definitely do – ok it’s meant to be about the writing… 🙂 Scrumptious!
Ah,now I will need to google this Matthew,lol!Thanks ,my mind just could not conjure up anything better 😛
As you say hun… great minds think alike… I rather fancy seeing someone.. (hot, male and very sexy) slide down a pole….xx Well done babe..xx
Ha!ha!Not a bad fantasy,what say?;-)Thank you so much for your pat on the back-I feel a bit better 🙂
So glad you gave our side a bit of that, Atreyee! lol
Lol Kymm,glad you think so-I was at my wit’s end,wishing for the first time I was a man!;-)
LOL 🙂
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more like – why should boys have all the fun ? 😀
Lol!So true!
And thk you for stopping by Shreya:-)
Yes! I was wondering if someone would tackle a male stripper 😉 Brilliant, sexy work!
Ha!ha!I too thought that there will be repeats but was glad to note that I edged in first;-)Glad you liked it,was worried that I really had messed it up,so thank you for your lovely comment 🙂
Oh yeah… reminds me of the movie, Magic Mike. Sexy stuff, girl, nice work – your writing, I mean – 🙂
Thank you Steph-must watch that movie then 😉
Beefcake! Yum!! I loved this so much! Thank you;)
Thank you Valerie,am so glad you feel this way,made me happy 🙂
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Talk about a hot night! I won’t say where my mind wondered…lol
Lol Renada,I loved those saucer eyes & your comment,thank you so much for dropping by:-)
Original, yet the reverse is almost a cliche..
That’s so kind of you to say,thank you Rog:-)
Love it!
:-)Thank you Linda
Oops,did I just say thank you Linda-?My eyes & brain both need a check up-my apologies Deana-thank you for stopping by & hope you had a wonderful Birthday & a lovely Easter with your family:-)
hehe… Thank you! I hope you had a lovely Easter
as well!
:-)We do not celebrate Easter -I am Hindu but have a lot of Christian friends who do:-)
Sorry! I hope you had a good weekend!
No need to apologise Deana,its absolutely alright & yes had a good weekend,thank you so much:-)
Woohoo! Now that’s the way to break loose and have some fun!! I really enjoyed this! 😀
Ha!ha!Thank you Linda,so glad you did;-)
Oh…my….my! Nice to see a story break the standard with a male stripper instead of female (I guess the visual wasn’t bad, either :))
ROFL!Thks Janna-glad I did something right 😉
Ha! Ha! whoo, I think I need to sit for a moment ;}
Lol!Thanks Jane:-)
Great story with reverse pov. Fun read too.
:-)Thank you Lumdog
Glad you showed it from a different perspective. Nice piece.
:-)Thank you Kelly
I love that the stripper is male!
:-)Thank you Bee.Left a comment on your beautiful piece-hope you made it “rain”:-)
Wowsa. Loved how you stood the stereotype on its head.
Aww,thank you so much:-)Such appreciation coming from you means more to me than I can express,thank you again 😀
way to turn the tide, Atreyee!
Thank you Jody:-)
What fun this was! A true pleasure to read.
Thank you so much TM:-)
The last line was a surprise. I liked how you use a male stripper and turned the tables on the sexes.
Thank you Ann,glad it appealed to so many of us:-)
That was very visual….and I somehow was seeing Hilary Swank from PS I love you…
Well done..
Thank you Sini:-)Who is HS & what is PS?sorry have no idea 😛