Trifextra: Week Sixty-Five
The challenge this weekend is to give 33 words about anything we want as long as the piece includes at least one hyphenated compound modifier. Here comes mine:-)
—————————————————————————————————————-
Unreasonable
He shot her.In the head.Twice.
Then he dumped her body in the old well.
Admitted,she was outstanding in every which way, but wanting to be his wife?
Ridiculous!
He detested over-ambitious women!
——————————X——————————
Advertisements
Over-ambitious women are the WORST!! LOL.
Ha!ha!They are;-)
Yikes, I guess he did, though he had an over-kill reaction. 🙂
Ha!ha!Yes I agree,thk u Steph for stopping by-am on the last legs of reading-some 10 more ,then off to bed-your’s is among them:-)
What a ‘short’ thriller (no hyphen) …Diane
Ha!ha!Thanks a to Diane:-)
Ha!ha!Thanks a ton Diane:-)
Love this. We get a lot about each of them in very few words!
Thank you so much Lena:-)
I think…a simple no would have sufficed o__O haha this is crazy. I like it 😀
Ha!ha!If she was over-ambitious,he was no under-achiever ;-)Thanks Draug-was happy with the way it came in a flash & glad you liked it:-)
She was outstanding in every which way? I think I’d have made the sacrifice N’s married her. Fun read. 🙂
Aha ha!Lumdog,remember she was over-ambitious?Lol!Thanks my friend for coming by always:)
Great use of your 33 words.
It seems he had no choice, over ambitious women can be such a burden!
True,anything that is too much can always escalate into a problem-:-)Thank you so much Mike for stopping by to read & comment:-)
The nerve of that woman-assuming he’d want to marry her! 😉
This was a fun read-such an unexpected and clever take on the prompt, Atreyee! Very well done!!
Your comment made me burst into laughter -you got his” indignant tone” pat!;-)Thank you so much for coming by Valerie & leaving such fun comments:-)
Well, at this rate, he will never be married. And the old well might become too full. I hope he finds an under-achiever who detests the idea of being his wife – that should suit him well 🙂
ROFL!Love the way your mind works Janna-no wonder you are such a good story teller:-)Thanks my friend xoxo
Some women never learn! Of course, some men overreact… I really enjoyed this! Great job with the prompt!
(Giggle)so true!Thank you Suzanne,your words never fail to make me smile:-)
Haha, wow, what a reaction! He has a pretty high opinion of himself I suppose. Nice job!
That he has,lol!Thank you for stopping by & commenting Brian:-)
Perhaps a woman might be luckier in the well than married to him. Does the man not know how to say no.
Ha!ha!True,he seems an opinionated SOB but who knows-some over -ambitious women are such a pain too!Thank you Ann for coming by & commenting:-)
Well, that taught her! Ha
Tight piece, Atreyee!
Ha!ha!It definitely did!Thank you Kymm:-)
Wow…. nice. I don’t like over-ambitious women either… but I don’t kill ’em.
Lol,Ted,glad you don’t & yes over-ambitious women (or men) are not really easy to like:-)Thanks for stopping by
He sounds like a real winner.
He!he!Thanks for stopping by Jennifer 🙂
What a lovely man! I can’t imagine why he has any trouble dating.
Ha!Ha!I guess he needs someone who can give him a dose of his own medicine;-)Thanks for coming by TM:-)
Oh what an original take on the prompt Atryee! Wonderful and absolutely chilling! Especially to think that there might be men out there who think like he does! Yikes!
LOL – love the way you used the prompt this week. Very funny.
Eeek!! Short and punchy! Love the double unreasonable there! His viewpoint vs reality!
Clever ending A!
Ab mujhe wapas jakar padhna padega ki kahani thi kya?lol!