The Big Red Cheese

Trifextra: Week Sixty-Six

This weekend Trifecta wanted us to write  the origin story to the superhero of our choice in exactly 33 words.Now although like most other people I love many superheroes but had no favourite.Thus,after swinging between the more popular ones like Batman,Superman,Spiderman and others,I decided on one of the oldest Superhero of all-hope you like it:-)


The Big Red Cheese


Homeless newsboy

Billy Batson

Granted superpowers

by Wizard


the magic word


Solomon’s wisdom

Hercules’ strength

Atlas’s stamina

Zeus’s power

Achilles’ courage

Mercury’s speed


World’s mightiest mortal

Captain Marvel was born!





24 thoughts on “The Big Red Cheese

    • Thank you Janna-very tough for me this week as I don’t know much about these superheros-am not able to relate/connect with most pieces-don’t know what to comment or like- 😛

  1. This is as good an origin story as we’ve had this weekend. Good for you for writing, what seems like, more than 33 words. The acrostic is icing on a very clever cake. Well done, Atreyee!

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