Carpe Diem’s “Little Ones”#4, Tanka
The honey sweet words
Laced the dagger of deceit
striking the heart numb-
But love knows not to forget
and heart cares not for reason!
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The honey sweet words
Laced the dagger of deceit
striking the heart numb-
But love knows not to forget
and heart cares not for reason!
the bitter pang of love betrayed
well done
JzB
Thank you Jzb:-)Will come by tonight to read your Tanka:-)
A kind of ‘passionate crime’. And you’ve caught it so well in this tanka.
Kristjaan (your host at Carpe Diem)
Oh ,that’s a cool way to look at it-thank you Kristjaan:-)