Carpe Diem #334 Fence

Carpe Diem #334, fence (provided by Lolly)

The prompt “fence” is full of possibilities and ai think it made me go a little mad 😀 Here are my efforts for what they are worth:-)

 

Sitting on the fence-
undecided
or plain cowardly?

Fence me in
with your love-
wolves inching closer.

Broken fence
a reminder
of passing time.

Visitors
outside the fence
prisoners inside

Crazy fans
toppling the fence
mayhem let loose

Stuck to the fence
carcass of
electrocuted cattle

Leaning over the fence
to exchange
love notes,stolen kisses

Crushed under the
fallen fence
tiny sapling,still lives.

 

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28 thoughts on “Carpe Diem #334 Fence

    • Lol,thank you :-)I guess it is the season-sets the mood,no-just wrote a Vampire tale-will post it tomorrow on my blog(for another challenge)-it’s kinda late here-1.45a.m-,daughter down with fever again-so will have to call it a night 😛

    • :-)I felt it was getting too wicked and gory,so a soft touch(carry over from Garry Gay) would make it look less harsh and to end on a positive/hopeful note is always more appealing,no?Thank you so much LFAL for reading and stopping by but most for understanding -appreciate it:-)

    • Thank you my friend:-)I checked out your Haibun pg but honestly could not understand how to tackle such an intellectual challenge-no brains you see 😛 But I have started reading and googling and maybe in a few days time I will try and attempt something-it is intimidating though And I had no idea that u & MG are one & the same person-talk of stupidity,lol!

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