Carpe Diem Special #64, Garry Gay’s fifth haiku “touched”
At Carpe Diem,the goal of this Special episode is to write a new haiku inspired on the one given by Garry Gay and to try to catch the same mood as the haiku by Garry Gay.
touched
in the darkness–
by a snowflake
in the darkness–
by a snowflake
(c) Garry Gay
In my excitement I have written quite a few-hopefully they are in keeping with the essence of the beautiful Haiku by Garry:-)
Touched by stormy night
a leaf shivers
hugging the window pane
Touched by
stony silence
fragile heart breaks
Soft lips meet
moist in desire-
passion smolders
Eyes close in slumber
touched by
mother’s love
Nostalgia-
touches a chord
stirs a forgotten memory
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what I love about this series is the different aspects and angles of a single word. Nicely done
Thank you so much MDW:-)
Wow you were on a roll Atreyee …. nice series of haiku in respons of Garry’s haiku. Awesome!
Thank you Kristjaan-guess I had missed CD too much and this was all pent up,lol!
Thank you Atreyee for this compliment.
My pleasure:-)