Carpe Diem-Tan Renga # VIII

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #VIII, MMT’s ”even candent days”

Kristjaan,our host at CD shares an amazing Haiku by Magical Mystical Teacher(MMT) for this Tan Renga challenge.

even candent days
cannot drive the willow leaves
from their homing place

(c) MMT

Here are two attempts at completion, from sleepy me-not very satisfactory,am afraid but this is what came to my mind:-)

your cold indifference fails
to outlive my love for you

flaming desire in the heart
set aflame on winter nights

 

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21 thoughts on “Carpe Diem-Tan Renga # VIII

  1. both offer something unique to the completion of this haiku – of course, flames of any kind attracts me, 🙂 so second one for me hits me fiercely.

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