Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #VIII, MMT’s ”even candent days”
Kristjaan,our host at CD shares an amazing Haiku by Magical Mystical Teacher(MMT) for this Tan Renga challenge.
even candent days
cannot drive the willow leaves
from their homing place
(c) MMT
Here are two attempts at completion, from sleepy me-not very satisfactory,am afraid but this is what came to my mind:-)
your cold indifference fails
to outlive my love for you
flaming desire in the heart
set aflame on winter nights
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I vote for cold indifference. lol
Lol!Thk u Angie-will be dropping by today to have a look at your posts-have been busy lately and last night I was too tired to read anything more:-)
I agree. That cold indifference is sad. A moving piece. A great finish to the haiku.
Thank you Steph-so glad to see that you are back-missed u
Cold indifference gets me too.
Even candent days
😀 Thank you for the comment JRB-we all get affected by it -warm is always better than cold-unless it is ice-cream of course;-)
cold indifference makes me shiver.
It turns me cold 😛 Thank you for reading Plaridel:-)
The first contribution resonates more for me… They are both very good.
Eliz
Thank you Eliz:-)
I like the first one 🙂
Thank you UABU:-)
I’m a sucker for romance…..#2. 🙂
😀 Thks Wabi-me too 😉
Wonderful melancoly you paint with the cold indifference.. great to contrast the nature with the personal.
Thank you Bjorn-so glad you liked it:-)
both offer something unique to the completion of this haiku – of course, flames of any kind attracts me, 🙂 so second one for me hits me fiercely.
Aha!”Patanga”;-)Thanks a ton Sun 😀
You are making it difficult to choose Atreyee. I love both completions, but I feel more flaming romance with the second … Thank you for sharing and participating.
How sweet of you to say so Kristjaan-thank you so much:-)I feel thrilled to be able to participate whenever I have time-tonight I hope to write some Haiku for CD:-)
Looking forward to your posts for CD