Carpe Diem- Tan Renga challenge # XVIII

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVIII, Joanne’s “by the shallow pond”

At Carpe Diem,our host Kristjaan has set the bar high with a beautiful Tan Renga completion ,for this lovely Haiku by Joanne.

by the shallow pond
reflection drawing northern fowl
a warm sun shimmers
 

(c) Joanne

Inspired by Kristjaan,here are my two completions:-)

bent shoulders,dimming eye sight
signals a sad homecoming

who is that in the mirror
just the smile resembles me

Atreyee

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7 thoughts on “Carpe Diem- Tan Renga challenge # XVIII

    • You are right Bjorn-so perceptive of you-at 52,life seems to be good but one cannot remain oblivious to the changes within and around one-in ageing or ill relatives,dying friends and colleagues & one’s own mortality too-sigh!Thank you for the wonderful comment:-)

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