Trifextra: Week 102
This week Trifextra is asking for exactly 33 of our own words about love gone wrong. But we’re not to use any of the following words:
love
sad
tears
wept
heart
pain
This weekend’s challenge is community judged.
– See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.sNMv8id0.dpuf
This sure was a tough challenge but had fun writing this.Hope you enjoy my 33 words:-)
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The affair
Gerald and Suzy are lovers.
Enter Allen-the rich, handsome neighbour.
A secret affair blossoms…
Rumours spread.
Suzy decides to end it all.
Walks in-to catch Gerald and Allen in the throes of passion!
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LOL. Ah the assumptions we make. A lovely response to the challenge. 🙂
😀 thank you so much Sarah:-)Wonder if you submitted anything?I read about 70 of the entries a while back-will see if I can catch some more tomorrow night
Hahaha Serves Suzy right!
😀 Thank you for the read Kymm
Ha ha ha love the twist! Thanks for sharing and don’t forget to vote!
Thank you Laura and I hope to be able to vote but my daughter’s 18th Birthday is day after and am very busy preparing for that party-so no promises this week.:-)
Ah, sneaky twist there. I’d assumed Suzy and Allen were having the affair and then the punchline 🙂
I hope your daughter has a wonderful birthday!
Ha!ha!Glad you did not get it till the last mine-that was my intention-have a sneaky mind ;-)Thank you so much for the wishes Janna-will definitely convey it to her 😀
Oh my! haha I love it.
😀 Thot let me go the other way this Valentine-so glad you enjoyed Draug-thank you so much 🙂
Indeed — great play on prejudices.
Thank you Bjorn-glad that came through 🙂
I love this twisted tale! Had me going one way, then the change up! Well done!
Ha!ha!Loved that you were misled Glynis ;-)Thanks a ton for the read and of course for the cute comment:-)
I loved it! 🙂
Thank you again,you are so sweet:-)
A great twist, as usual, Atreyee! Well done!
And I hope your daughter’s birthday was fantastic!
Thank you Momo-yes,it was great 😀
Thank you so much Momo:-)