Do you see her much?
Oh, all the time, all the time!
Oh, I see her everywhere.
Why, oh why won’t she let me be?
When all is over between her and me?
I did her in and buried her
Then, why won’t she just lie still?
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This is my response to this week’s ultimate question at Gargleblaster #157. The challenge was to answer the ultimate question “Do you see her much?” in exactly 42 words. If you are interested in joining the fun,rush over to the site for complete details by clicking on the url http://yeahwrite.me/gargleblaster-157/ but hurry for the grid closes at 42 entries.
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Lie still, as in a grave? Sounds eerily nice.
Ha!ha!Yes!Thank you Habiba:-)Will come by tonight to read the entries-hopefully you have joined in
Creepy take, Atreyee! And an enjoyable one too. So the guilt keeps bringing her back to her murderer. Nice!
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Thank you so much Shailaja and yes,you got it right :-)Will come by tonight to read all the entries-hope your’s is waiting too:-)
Creepy… but I loved every single word of it 🙂
~S(t)ri
Smile, it makes (y)our day!
Thank you so much Sri:-)
Reminds me of the stains of blood that Lady Macbeth could not wash off her hands!
Ah Ramesis,trust you to put your finger on the right pulse my friend :-)Thank you for stopping by to read and comment.Why don’t you join in?
Oh, great guilt. There’s just no getting away from some people. Creepy good story, Atreyee,.
Lol,so true ;-)Thank you Gina 🙂
😀 A pleasure.
Muaah!
I’m glad she’s getting revenge.
Good point, Marcy.
:-)Thank you cynking
:-)Thank you Marcy
I think the character just answered his/her own question: she wasn’t ready to go yet 🙂 (Sometimes we are so oblivious to how our own actions affect a situation!)
True Janna ;-)Thanks my dear for reading and commenting as always ❤
Oh good one. I’m debating doing one and wanted to see how it’s going this morning
Thank you Sue:-)Hopefully you joined-will come by tonight to read and comment-see you then 🙂
Whew, this one gave me the shivers! I’m still in awe that someone so sweet as yourself can write such chilling tales!
Ha!ha!I guess I can’t stay away from the dark ones 😛 Thank you so much:-)However my FF entry this week went a different way-I haven’t yet checked the responses on it-so no idea if you have read it or not Adelie.I was not well again and am delayed-still plodding through the stories on FF-reached 70 I think-sigh!
Atreyee! I love your dark twists ;-)!!!
Thank you so much dear Gina:-)
I like the repetition in the first and third lines – it lends a certain urgency to the narrator’s voice. Nicely done, Atreyee!
Thank you dear Christine-I will be back tonight to catch up on my reading and commenting 🙂
Ooh. Nice twist at the end. Spooky! 🙂
Thank you Caroline:-)
You’ve ‘done in’ yet another….! Diane
Ha!ha!Can’t keep my evil mind in control,Diane;-)
Well, if your protagonist hadn’t seen her off, she wouldn’t be haunting. Sometimes it’s better just to let a relationship end naturally 😉 Well told.
Ha!ha!You are right ;-)Thanks Sarah-I had some bad news about a friend yesterday so could not read-will start my reading today evening -busy day as hubby is leaving on a trip for 3 days.
Love it!.
Thank you so much:-)
I like your blog design too.
Aww,thks 🙂
Haunting.
Thank you so much Robbie:-)
Wicked
Thank you M.L:-)
That was fantastic, I wasn’t expecting that mate
Thank you for the kind comment snellopy-I just started on my reading spree so that I can vote at one go :- )Will get to yours soon 🙂
Those last two lines caught me by surprise, though I should know you better by now, Atreyee. 🙂 Nicely done.
Ha!ha!My murderous lil self just can’t stay away from these acts Tinsen 😉
Because she needs REVENGE!! ack! lol great story
Ha!ha!Thank you Jen for the bombastic comment-u made me laugh aloud 😀
Creepy, enjoyable, this is so you! Loved it A.
Ha!ha!You are right R-thanks a ton:-)
Edgar Allen Poe-ish, lol.
Thanks.