Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #35, Managua’s “let the ravens come”

 

 

 After a hiatus of few months,am back .So happy to see the CD community thriving under the able guidance of our gracious host Kristjaan.This week he has chosen the haiku  below,composed by Managua of “Fresh From a Hermit’s Forest”.The challenge is to  write/compose a second stanza (classical 7-7 syllables) towards the given haiku. 

 

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let the ravens come
let them smile as they pick the flesh
from the battlefield  (Managua)

 

And here is my completion

Power hungry men huddle
conspiring against world peace (Atreyee)

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12 thoughts on “Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #35, Managua’s “let the ravens come”

  1. Well, I must say, you didn’t add a postive couple of lines – truthful probably, but miserable just the same.
    Sorry to hear about your health problems – I hope the you and the docs get a mediation/ lifestlye regime that works for you sorted out soon. 🙂

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