Tan Renga

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #12, Southard’s “the swing of the gate”.

 

Just yesterday I wrote my first Haiku & today my friend Bjorn  introduced me  this incredible blog http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/.And here I am trying out my first challenge,hoping not to make a fool of myself.Thank you for the tip Chèvrefeuille,I used the Haiku syllable counter 🙂

 

Here is the haiku by Southard which is the first stanza of this weeks Tan Renga:

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate.

The goal of this Tan Renga Challenge is to write the second stanza (7-7) by associating on the first stanza.

 

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate                                                              (Southard)

 

the chatter,laughter gone now
Hello! Whom to mimic now?                                               (Atreyee)

 

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