Carpe Diem-Tan Renga challenge #27

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #27, “I catch the sunrise”


At CD,our wonderful host Kristjaan has chosen  to start this week’s Tan Renga Challenge i with a haiku written by Ese of Ese’s Voice.

great expectations
entangled in fishing line
i catch the sunrise

(c) Ese

My completion-

the sea of desire whimpers
reality lashes back

undaunted,I change the bait
smiling,reel in the surprise