If only…

Trifecta: Week Seventy-Seven

This week the word prompt is-

1: characterized by or resulting from careful and thorough consideration <a deliberate decision>
2: characterized by awareness of the consequences<deliberate falsehood>
3: slow, unhurried, and steady as though allowing time for decision on each individual action involved <a deliberate pace>

  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words. 
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post. 
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response. 
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above. 
  • Only one entry per writer

This week,my mind is messed up-in a total blue funk.But I was loathe to let the week go by without my Trifecta  fix.So here is my(almost) last minute entry-hope it bring on a flicker of a smile 🙂



If only…



She frowned, looking down at the question paper lying on her desk.


It seemed to be looking back at her with a sneer on its face!


Oh!If only she had studied for this exam earlier..


But her heart was not in it. It was busy leaping uncontrollably at the sight of a certain someone…


The one with a golden voice, the one with the golden smile…the one whose golden head was now bent on his paper, writing effortlessly. no doubt  with his golden pen!


Sigh!If only she had not dreamt about a golden future with this golden boy,she could have been  building a golden future  for herself  by qualifying in this exam


But all was not lost.Not for nothing had she been the topper in the class, before the “golden aura” tarnished her image.


With a deliberate mental sweep, she cleared the cobwebs off her memory bank


In response, the question paper seemed to flutter its eyelashes at her coquettishly, as if saying, “Oh sweetie you know how I turn into putty in your hands!”


Soon her beautiful coppery head was bowed down ,her hand trying to keep pace with her mercurial brain.


Had she looked up,she would have seen surprised-even shocked- to find a pair of sparkling green eyes looking at her enviously,the golden face a little in awe of her intellectual prowess and swamped  by her Hellenic beauty……….




Wonder of wonders

I just joined  Trifecta ( http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/ ), a wonder-ous site & I hope to have a wonder-ful time participating in their exciting challenges,not to forget the amazing  posts from my fellow Trifectans 🙂

Challenge Instructions

Trifecta consists of two weekly challenges: one weekday prompt and one weekend prompt.
This week’s one word prompt is:
a : a cause of astonishment or admiration : marvel <it’s a wonder you weren’t killed> <the pyramid is a wonder to behold>

b : miracle

: the quality of exciting amazed admiration
Please remember:
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response.
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
  • Only one entry per writer.
  • Trifecta is open to everyone!!  Please join us.
This week’s challenge is community-judged.
My debut is definitely going to be filled with wonder-at what I am going to pen & how it will be received by you all-well,no point in wondering or letting you wander away in wonder-so here is my little piece-hope you like it:-)

He looked into her eyes- limpid brown pools.She smiled back,a little shy.He took her soft hands into his,holding them gently.He could hear his racing heart,resonating in his ears.He drew her close-she blushed.As he bent his head,she tilted her face up.His lips brushed her rose bud lips softly &  he felt her melt into his arms.Time stood still…the wonder of first kiss…first love…etched in their hearts forever…