Carpe Diem-Tan Renga challenge #XXIV

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XXIV, Sun’s ”gathering seashells”

 

The challenge set by our host Kristjaan for this Tan Renga completion is this beautiful starting  haiku written by Sun of Simply Charming

gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls
two sisters bicker
 
(c) Sun

 This is my completion.

the tidal wave and the shore
separate, yet together

(Atreyee)

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Tan Renga

Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Challenge #12, Southard’s “the swing of the gate”.

 

Just yesterday I wrote my first Haiku & today my friend Bjorn  introduced me  this incredible blog http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.in/.And here I am trying out my first challenge,hoping not to make a fool of myself.Thank you for the tip Chèvrefeuille,I used the Haiku syllable counter 🙂

 

Here is the haiku by Southard which is the first stanza of this weeks Tan Renga:

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate.

The goal of this Tan Renga Challenge is to write the second stanza (7-7) by associating on the first stanza.

 

Just the cellarpit;
only the catbird recalls
the swing of the gate                                                              (Southard)

 

the chatter,laughter gone now
Hello! Whom to mimic now?                                               (Atreyee)

 

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