Trifextra: Week Fifty-Seven
Weekend is here & its time for 33 words of Trifextra fun.See for yourself what the challenge is about ( http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/) & it is community judged,once again:-)
For the weekend challenge we’re asking for exactly thirty-three words written in first person narrative.
So,here is my submission,hope you will like it:-)
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Oh no!
A chill ran down my spine.Lying curled up,I shivered.Was that a shadow entering the alleyway?I moaned.Where is the Police?The power went off ..& I cursed!
Wonder what happened in the movie next?
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@Zebra Crossing 
ahhh – durned technology! I wrote about its failures as well. 🙂
Ha!ha!Thank you Barbara-am just scooting off to read some more-your’s included:-)
I hate it when that happens.
:-)Guess all of us do.Thank you for stopping by & commenting Katie
Eeeee! Hide under the covers! Maybe they won’t notice you…
Great job telling the story…
Ha!ha!I was planning to but darn that power cut!;-)Thank you Tina for stopping by:-)
Last time it was murderers, this time I keep saying “I hate when that happens”. Weird. But I hate when that happens!
Lol Kymm!Thank you for saying that:-_
Funny one! Lol I enjoyed your take on this weekend’s challenge. Good work, Atreyee.
Thank you for your kind words Tom,glad you like it:-)
Hello sweet – yes the suspense of is it happening to you…or in a Movie….erm did you pay your bill? 😉
Ha!ha!U caught me out-now that I remember it is still pending;-)Thanks for the reminder,tee,hee!
Is that you watching a movie in the first few sentences?
Oh,am sorry I hoped it would come across-seems I failed:-(But to answer your question,yes it is.
Thank you for reading & the feedback:-)
I want the back story! good job though
:-)Thank you,glad you enjoyed it Sam.No back story to this though-just a woman relaxing,watching a murder/horror movie on weekend when power goes off-poor thing!lol!
ha! This is great! (: I love the little twist.
I knew you would,thank you Draug:-)
Ha! Great twist. I hate when that happens. 🙂
Ha!ha!Guess we all do;-)Thank you for liking it Lumdog:-)
You brought a large smile to my face. A great start to my morning! Thank you
Aww,that’s one of the sweetest comments ever,thank you so much-am glad my piece made your morning a little brighter:-)
Really enjoyed your story – very clever.
:-)Thank you Sarah
Great take on the prompt! So visual – and I love your twist at the end!
;-)Thank you Suzanne-glad you enjoyed it.
Not a good situation. Nice and quick story. annbennett2.blogspot.com
:-)Thank you
You have such an imagination….!! Diane
Aww Diane,you are too kind but thank you for making me feel so good about myself:-)
Dang! Dontcha hate that. Hope you could find the replay online 😉 Good one.
Ha!ha!Thank you Kenya:-)
Oh! I hate when that happens. Nice take on the prompt.
I know,its damned frustrating-thank you for stopping by Renee:-)
Just when I was about to bite my finger! – nice twist 🙂 Great piece..
Lol!Thank you MissM,glad you liked it:-)
Good one
:-)Thank you
That happens a lot here… power cuts… Loved it, very good.. Gorgeous blog by the way…x
Aw,,thank you-I was just going through your’s-very impressive:-)
This made me laugh out. Love the twist
:-)thank you Deana for always reading & supporting my efforts-I appreciate it.
Things like this always happen at the most inappropriate time. And I’d be doggone if you don’t hurl a few expletives at the TV.
Ha!ha!I see you have been there too;-)Thanks so much for visiting:-)
Never mind – it’ll be on again in a couple of days!
Lol!Thank you for the info-will definitely catch the rest this time:-)
Oh no! I hate being left in the lurch!
Me too!Thank you for stopping by:-)
Tension Left hanging. 😉 fun take
:-)Thank you
Haha! I’m always a fan of a good twist. Nicely written! (But methinks you’re gone a wee bit over the 33 words this time round.) 😉
Thanks:-)I had MSWords count thrice & it said 33-so I do not know who is wrong
*MS Word
That happened when my husband and I went to see “Sherlock Holmes.’ Kind of broke the movie spell for the audience.
oh what a let down!Thank you for stopping by Tara:-)
Didn’t see the ending coming – well done in 33 words.
:-)Thank you Rog