Carpe Diem”s Tan Renga Challenge Month #IX, JRB”s ”By the shore”
Our gracious host at Carpe Diem,Kristjaan,has chosen a beautiful Haiku again for the Tan Renga challenge.
by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
discarded lovers
broken shells
(c) JRB
Here is my completion.
memories of dream lovers
crashing waves, drown in the sea
little running feet fling sand
sand castles,new promises
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memories and new promises makes wonderful completions – i like the second finish best. ♥
Thank you Sun-we all love fresh beginnings & kids represent them best,no? Thank you for reading:-)
Two lovely beach images you’ve gifted us here. Thank you 🙂
So glad you liked the two completions to your beautiful Haiku JRB:-)Thank you so much
Wonderful completions Atreyee, the second however is my favorite and makes the Tan Renga a beauty.
Thank you Kristjaan:-)